tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124770754805827894.post3488926577239149365..comments2023-06-15T11:59:39.572-04:00Comments on DYVERS: The Ballad of Milo Gutherie and the Ship of Fools (part 1)Dyvershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06032957275132817602noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124770754805827894.post-36304416948094099132014-05-09T15:16:11.479-04:002014-05-09T15:16:11.479-04:00I don't know if you're going to make some ...I don't know if you're going to make some of this into a scene, but a good start would be having Milo pee on the commemorative plaque and the townsfolk getting upset, confonting him, and Milo just shrugging them. Start with action and all that. Then get into the exposition. <br /><br />Though keep it up. This makes want to post fiction blog in the near future.<br />Stelios V. Perdioshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05466676702515521939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124770754805827894.post-7707441317727608672014-05-09T09:04:28.230-04:002014-05-09T09:04:28.230-04:00Could be a great background for a character to be ...Could be a great background for a character to be included in a campaign! I'd like, as DM, to find the ways to involve him and make him join a party of adventurers ... it would be a nice challenge. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09772329817644671667noreply@blogger.com